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bgriffin70
Junior Member
Registered: October 2006
Location: Norman, OK
Posts: 30
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Thu August 2, 2007 8:21am
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Rating: 8.00
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bgriffin70
Junior Member
Registered: October 2006
Location: Norman, OK
Posts: 30
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Thu August 2, 2007 8:26am
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You just can't go wrong with Haley, she's a knockout! She's got it all - cute, great complexion, very sexy, she seems to be having fun - I envy you having such a little hottie to work with. Okay, now that I'm through gazing into her eyes -
On this particular photo, I can't help but notice that right hand. It looks like the hand is not only distracting from her face, but also pressing against her cheek and causing some very minor facial distortion.
The light also looks to be off, with more key light on the right side of her face. It's not bad mind you, but I'm looking forward to seeing others!!!
I would love to see her start showing off her figure! I say this because if she's really into modeling, or thinking about it, that's probably the next step an agent will want to view. I don't know, but the both of you definitely have something working there and I give it an "8."
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Jim Jones
Senior Member & Contributor
Registered: March 2004
Location: rural northwest Missouri
Posts: 2,584
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Thu August 2, 2007 11:30am
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Rating: 9.00
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This is one of your better shots of Haley. It has good color and a good background. The hand is only a moderate distraction. Rather than making just another pin-up of her, you have generally chosen to photograph her in those ways in which she is most beautiful, which is very beautiful indeed. A few other girls might do cheesecake better, but won't have those eyes and that smile.
Congratulations on 200 posts, Christopher. Since 9% of them have been of Haley, you have demonstrated the advantage of quality over quantity.
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chaud
Administrator & Contributor
Registered: April 2004
Location: British Columbia Canada
Posts: 2,295
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Thu August 2, 2007 7:43pm
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Hmmm, to me it looks like the green colour cast is back. I've looked at this on three monitors and one of them is calibrated and see it on all three. Use the color picker on her left (not our left) front tooth and you will see what I mean.
I tried an easy fix and it worked quite well. Open "curves" and selecte the green channel, then using the mouse and holding down the 'ctrl' key, click on her left tooth. Now highlight the "output" box and using the "down arrow" decrease the green about 5 or 6 units.
Fred
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