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Rachelle
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Registered: October 2004
Location: Ingleside TX
Posts: 660
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Fri July 13, 2007 12:33pm
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did you use a telephoto lens here? I really like the image. My only nitpik is her head is turned in such a way that makes her neck look a bit strange.
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“Any photographer who says he's not a voyeur is either stupid or a liar” - Helmut Newton
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chaud
Administrator & Contributor
Registered: April 2004
Location: British Columbia Canada
Posts: 2,104
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Fri July 13, 2007 12:55pm
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Another nice portrait of pretty Sarah! She sure is a lovely young lady. I don't mind the way her neck looks. My nit would be the hands. Especially her left, the way it is clamped to her shoulder, looks...odd. My other nit and it is a small one, is the shadow over the right side of her face. A bit of fill light there would be nice there.
Now, Chris. I hope you turned your back and didn't peek while she took her top off. 
Fred
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Barbara & Fred's Other Gallery & Fred's Sportsshooter Gallery
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topcat
Senior Member
Registered: November 2005
Posts: 106
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I agree with the hand, but it is a small nit. It is a great picture. The colours are very nice. I like it a lot.
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Rachelle
Senior Member
Registered: October 2004
Location: Ingleside TX
Posts: 660
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Sat July 14, 2007 5:22am
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still very cool!
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“Any photographer who says he's not a voyeur is either stupid or a liar” - Helmut Newton
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jasonh
Senior Member
Registered: March 2004
Location: Brooklyn!
Posts: 471
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Who is looking at her hands?
I don't mind the pose, I love the colors that were caught in the water. Nice shot.
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"Life is serious, but art is fun." - John Irving
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Sergio
Senior Member
Registered: May 2004
Location: Moreno Valley, California
Posts: 158
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Sat July 14, 2007 10:33am
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Excellent balance of natural and artificial light. As others have mentioned, I too would prefer a bit (not much) of light on the left to fill the shadows.
I like the pose and colorful refections, great use of DOF.
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I have the body of a god!!! Buddah is a god . . . right?
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kombizz
Junior Member
Registered: June 2007
Location: USA
Posts: 29
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what a cute model
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I was born and brought up in Iran, a beautiful country full of history.
k o m b i z z
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mcs550
Senior Member & Contributor
Registered: January 2006
Location: Southgate, Mi.
Posts: 187
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Well maybe the shadows just a tad dark but I think it adds to the shot. Very well done.
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Every Saint has a past, every Sinner a future.
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jframe8530
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Registered: June 2008
Posts: 6
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MrTopher
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Registered: November 2005
Location: Ypsilanti, MI, USA
Posts: 72
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