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bgriffin70
Junior Member
Registered: October 2006
Location: Norman, OK
Posts: 31
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I like this series Chris. The light seems a little flat to me, but it looks like this is an outdoor shoot on an overcast day, so that goes without saying.
On this particular shot, I'm not too fond of her facial expression. Something about the smile. I don't know, maybe it's just me.
Are these senior portraits? She is a lovely young woman and great complexion for photographing. Look forward to seeing more of your work!
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Rachelle
Senior Member
Registered: October 2004
Location: Ingleside TX
Posts: 773
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I like them all quite well. I guess that's because they remind me of my photographic style. Generally, outdoor portraits usually work better on an overcast day, as long as there isn't much sky in the pic. I do like the use of DOF in the other images as well.
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“Any photographer who says he's not a voyeur is either stupid or a liar” - Helmut Newton
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chaud
Administrator & Contributor
Registered: April 2004
Location: British Columbia Canada
Posts: 2,471
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It is the eyes the smile and she has lovely eyes. The landscape format works well with a portrait like this and you have composed it well. I probably shouldn't critique portraits from my laptop, the screen sucks, but there does seem to be a bit of a color cast to the image. Maybe due to all that green foliage?
Fred
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Barbara & Fred's Other Gallery & Fred's Sportsshooter Gallery
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The Rookie
Senior Member
Registered: March 2004
Location: New England
Posts: 1,872
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Again, more light would make these images pop. Great background.
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Jim Jones
Senior Member & Contributor
Registered: March 2004
Location: rural northwest Missouri
Posts: 2,628
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I like the expression. Good background, too.
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Boz16
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Registered: July 2005
Location: Long Island, New York
Posts: 79
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Nice set-up and great background for this shot. The pose and the smile are very nice too.
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The man is a no good miserable lout, and I say that with all due respect...Woody Allen
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