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chaud
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Registered: April 2004
Location: British Columbia Canada
Posts: 2,478
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Thu March 15, 2007 12:06pm
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Gorgeous composition and DOF, Paul. Love this in B&W and the sepia toning is beautiful. You've lost some detail in the upper petals with the conversion--you could try using the highlight tool sliders to bring back the detail (slide the shadow % adj. to zero.) Love the ethereal glow the blossom has--simply gorgeous!!
Barbara
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photopeb
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Registered: March 2007
Posts: 6
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Thu March 15, 2007 12:10pm
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Great work! I love the soft contrast and the lovely tones!
Very nice dof and point of focus! Really nice on the eyes as
well! Great work!
Congrats!
Much love
Paul E Brumit
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c8h10n4o2
Goa'ould
Registered: September 2005
Location: east coast
Posts: 2,410
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Thu March 15, 2007 1:11pm
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too much empty space on the left, also what barbara mentioned about the petals being blown, otherwise, very nice.
beth
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paul lowell
Senior Member
Registered: March 2005
Location: Warrenton Mo
Posts: 781
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Thu March 15, 2007 1:56pm
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Thanks for the comments, I'll redo this and repost it with the changes suggested.
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wolfy
Senior Member
Registered: March 2004
Location: Kansas City
Posts: 872
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NJ.Murphy
Senior Member
Registered: March 2004
Location: Downstairs, in the back
Posts: 309
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Thu March 15, 2007 7:03pm
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Fix the highlight, but don't change a thing with the cropping. I think it really balances the entire composition.
This is something I'd put on my wall.
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